The three little schnauzers and the big, bad wolf

Once upon a time, in the middle of the forest lived three little schnauzers! They had to move out of their doggy home because their mother said "Go build a great, strong home!," they dashed like fast cheetahs into the great, sandy plains, the first little schnauzer called Dashy made his house out of steak, beef and glass, its shape was half a sphere "Woofy, woof!," The second schnauzer called Woofy made its house with squeaky rubber. "Squeaky, SQUEAAKKK," The 3rd schnauzer called Noodle made its house out of the most best dog chocolate in the world, the door was made out of the strongest metal in the entire world and had brick inside, the house had an outside layer of thick, hard brick. Then another layer of the most hardest, strongest, most durable, waterproof wood! It had really strong arches to support the half of a sphere! A big, bad, wolf came. The wolf came to the first little schnauzer, "Bark, bark, bark, bark, bark!," The schnauzer ran to the 2nd schnauzer and said "A wolf, a bad wolf! Go to the 3rd schnauzers house," "Why not stay in my house?," the 2nd schnauzer replied, "I will tell you later... Just go!," shouted the first schnauzer. The schnauzers went. The wolf came to the 2nd house "Bark! Bark!," The squeaky rubber was squeaking, "Squeeak!," The toys was ripped, "Huuhhhh, where did the schnauzers go?," The wolf went to the 3rd house, It bit the walls "Oww!!," The big wolf could not break the wall, It looked for a chimney "No chimney?," The door was super hard and strong. The wolf could not break it. "Awwww,". The 3 little schnauzers were happy, "Yayy!,". The wolf trotted away and fell into a pit. The 2 schnauzers decided that they should not be lazy and build a strong home, that you can chew. And the schnauzers lived happily ever after!

Comments

  1. Since dog's evolved from wolfs', wouldn't they be friend's? B.T.W the story was awesome cause the third house sound's cool to live in

    Flynn Haskins Rm 11

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  2. I really liked the way you switched the pigs and turned them into dogs. What gave you the idea for dogs? I wonder if you could look through the story to check spelling mistakes

    By Lochlan Room 12

    Wow James, I really like how you used 'Schnauzers' as your characters. Your story is so creative, and next time you should maybe keep your story short, because it was a bit to long to read for our Hub

    By Reydon Room 11

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  3. I really liked the way you rewrite the story of three little pigs and if it was mine ill do the same i really liked it because he use his imagination maybe next time make the sentence shorter.

    BY Regahn Rm12

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  4. Hey James I like how you had dogs inst id of pigs maybe put a chimney so it looks like
    a real story. by Roman

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  5. Nice story James! maybe when the characters say a dialog create a new line like this Chris opened the door.
    " Hi Mary "
    " Hi Chris " Do you get it? I really like your vocabulary!
    From Samirah Rm 11

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