TANIWHA MARAE WRITING - Rapare te 30 o Pouto-te-rangi // Thursday 30 March

By Anonymous -
The taniwha becomes ghost white for 1 second then converts to his invisible self when it taps its head! The only seen/visible part is the orange and big fire from its super long tail.
People got confused on why there is levitating fire, The taniwha is at the gateway crawling slowly to the front of the line being unpolite and evil. People from the marae greet Hamilton East School to the marae. Hamilton East School followed them to a meeting place. The taniwha heard cicadas, birds, and footsteps. The meeting ended, the taniwha went to the whare kai and started eating, It smelt delicious. He thought "I think I have eaten too much!", He stopped eating. He decided to look at Kapa Haka perform and it look 5 minutes, He thought "That was a good performance!" then he decided to scare some people, He found someone and became visible and shouted "Hello!" in a super sinister voice and started flying towards the random victim and started screaming super loud and it hurt everyone's ears. He stopped and became invisible and went into the bus with the kids and the bus driver was scared about the fire. He tried to remove it with some water but it reappeared 5 seconds after. 

Comments

  1. Anonymous4 April 2017 at 09:35

    I like how you siad "The Taniwha becomes white for 1 second then becomes invisible when it taps its head"

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  2. Anonymous4 April 2017 at 09:43

    it is a ever cool story.
    next time you could write a little more describing words

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