Class Room 9 at H.E.S Finds Mosquitos In Pool!!

By Anonymous -
Class Room 9 at H.E.S Finds Mosquitos In Pool!!

Last week, Room 9 at H.E.S investigated the Mosquito H.E.S pool. Room 9 started to walk to the H.E.S pool. Room 9 started to go through the gate. We saw mosquitos! Whaea Georgia found them and talked about them and then picked one up. Somebody told Pippa (Principal) and she said something like “Oh no! We don’t want disease-carrying biting bugs!!”
Did you know the mosquito carries a very bad disease? Pippa asked Dugeon (Care Taker) and Dugeon took out the dirty water out of the H.E.S pool.

Newspaper Report Writing Rubric Level 1/2


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My piece has a headline.

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My headline gets the readers attention and tells about the main idea of the newsstory.

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The rest of my writing tells more facts.



I told about the news happening to someone else.- I have not used “I”


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I have underlined and corrected my spelling.

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